Too rough, too many caps, too many improbabilities, too lightly characters, too Manichaeism and enough is enough (even if it's a first novel). The reader, in this kind of novel, must love or hate his characters, feel emotions, admire them for their qualities to follow in these imaginary adventures !!! And where we are met in the tooth: the tearful metal. I will say that it lacks epic and that even if one is in the imagination some likelihood be observed! Too bad ....
