Good idea to script, can do better in writing

Good idea to script, can do better in writing

The path that led toward you (Paperback)

Customer Review

The basic idea of ​​this futuristic novel is interesting: what would happen in a disorganized country by the rapid loss of energy and therefore transport, internet, media and telecommunications.
The romantic story can however fishing giving of context elements. We stay hungry. It is not clear what is happening. It reads this quickly, some passages are clumsy.
The story focuses heavily on the characters and their feelings but of little clever way at the expense of contextual elements. The narrator is as close to the action but does not know what happens in the end ...
In short: the idea of ​​the script is good, implementation less. Too bad.

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