Nice story but not packed so far

It's a love story, OK, but the book is long, it drags a bit so we take off a little of the book to force.
I have not appreciated that Alaina've always after Cole and is always at the snub, or to rebel against him that from the beginning there have been nicer and more correct than him. I think it is in bad taste on the part of the writer who should have turned things differently between them.
Another thing that was a little block is the original plot that aims to Alaina accused of being a spy what pushes her to disguise themselves and hide.
From the beginning I find it shaky and inconsistent as can be, not at all realistic. If it goes above all that I understand that you can love and hold on to this novel. I really like when all slides perfectly and logically, I like being in the book, live with the characters from beginning to end.
It was not the case here, I think it looks almost teen reading.