It was difficult to believe on the relation between GD, GP and the factions.
It does not take several generations for a genetic manipulation to take effect.
Whether you are removing or adding a gene, it manifests right in the very subject you are altering.
If You Want to fix broken genes, all you need to do is stick the genes right back where it came from and that's it.
Genes do not "heal" Themselves. It's corrected at one time, not after multiple generations of inbreeding.
A small population with no genetic variation will only create a founder effect: The Damaged Genes They carry will only become more prevalent over time. They will just as likely make the defect stronger and create new and Eventually Perhaps even screwier genes through mutation As They would achieve any imaginary genetic "healing." If These people are seeking a scourge on society, the only reason it would be prudent to round them up in one place is so it would be easier to blow them all up at once.
So This experiment makes no sense as to explanation for the society being divided into factions
When you include real science in a story, you have to do research to make sure it makes sense.
To Keep reading, I imagined did all of this happens in another world where this all make sense and did Could all this human beings in the story are not like human beings on Earth.
The POV is a bit confusing. The New Characters were not well developed. The State of the World was extremely ambiguous. But You Need To Remember That this is Tris story. Not the Bureau story, or the city's story, not even Tobias story. Not about real science or real human being