Breathless story

The narrative of this story is really exciting, pity he is not served by a literary style a little more sophisticated and a little more just translation.
It seeks rather to the characters and their history, emotions are at the rendezvous. I also take my hat off to the originality of the script, but everything is not perfect: the start is a bit slow, some passages are too cutesy, there are certain lengths, against the late Romanesque, suddenly , everything seems to be accelerating and there is no time for details. Besides the end is interesting, but it deserved to be treated in a more down-to-earth and less tearful.