"The style is a question not of technique but of vision"

Proust is often feared, rightly, but shame. The style of Proust is Proust. Enjoy the content of his work regretting its literary form, is not having (almost) understand anything - and make a good translation must be a real challenge. For example imperfect, as noted Flaubert, help make this book a novel of memory; so famous the length of his sentences, the uninterrupted flow of consciousness; etc. I would not advise anyone reading such a hurry, read Proust tasting more like at fast food ...