A long end, dying and yet sloppy!

A long end, dying and yet sloppy!

MacKayla Lane Chronicles, Volume 5: Shadows Fever (Paperback)

Customer Review

I'm sorry I'll break the general enthusiasm but I'm super disappointed by this last volume.

This series was one of my favorites I found original and had a lot of hope on this last volume.

Although this is the last book and as always when a series ends you like you have a tip to heart, you learn the ins and outs with tons of revelations and will be ultra indulgent with this novel as you expected. ..

... But still!

This tome is long, too long ... I agonized for passages and have even jumped a few .. Already this volume could have done both and I have frankly preferred ..Ca would have allowed the author to tell as many things and dig them more because I'm sorry but this volume is rough and sometimes makes no sense! The shares are expected to botched a final battle that lasts ten pages to the end and ends with a frightening ease!
Mac is lost and made thousands of back and forth in mirrors and reaches us lose there too ...

Of course this is the end: there are cliffhangers, of course surprises! Baron Baron Ah! But we have all the answers, we do not understand everything, some passages are meaningless. This volume was sloppy and yet it had potential.

Moreover this volume has the palmares of one of the bad translations which I read in my life and inevitably it did not help!

Too bad I loved this series but I have the impression of a sloppy tome by an author who had too many ideas, has not managed to channel and could not work his text as it would wanted because the output of the last volume had already been announced!
More botched the translation of J'ai Lu!

You will understand I am disappointed and bitter and'm sorry to be the only one to be severe with this work but you have to call a spade a spade.

I put three stars because despite everything I love this series and that some ideas were well and found that the author still managed to surprise me in some passages.

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July 3
to listen 2 Rank: 3/5
May 5
Super solid 2 Rank: 5/5
July 7
My son loves 52 Rank: 4/5
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