Well ... hard hard to start long very long the establishment even if the plot seems original. Sometimes long passages which I believe will bring nothing more.
The other half of my bill is going to the idea (research of the future, a bit science fiction, an alarming view of the company). A somewhat disjointed story but remaining consistent throughout. Attachment to people has been quite late. It's a shame. Writing? I am mixed, I like the introspective side of Cassandra but it is so redundant. To believe that the inspiration was missing or we Alhzeimer.
In short: not bad topic but who asked more investment in writing and in the depth of the plot.