Choppy, angsty relationship drama ...!

Choppy, angsty relationship drama ...!

The Mortal Instruments 04 City of Fallen Angels (Mortal Instruments (Quality)) (Paperback)

Customer Review

When I finished this book It took me a while to decide on how to rate it. On one hand, It was not all bad. On the other, Compared to the first three books (Which I really liked) this one was a disappointment.

As a fourth book tacked on to a supposed trilogy, "City of Fallen Angels" was better than Stephenie Meyer's abysmally-bad "Breaking Dawn" (Which remains the only book I disliked so much did I still wish I could "un-read" it --- just scratch it out of my mind completely Call!). And yet, I can not say That I really enjoyed reading it. For one, the characters felt flat and oft behaved like spoiled and immature little children.

For another, nothing much happens in the book !!! I mean, seriously, more than 400 pages and there really is not anything happening !!! Add to deed the factthat several storylines did are started in the beginning of the story just sort of trickle away over the course of the book and thatthere are plot holes the size of Lake Michigan --- well, it all makes for a story That feels forced and a little bit like a first draft, not the final version of a book.

One of the plot lines in this book is the murder of several Shadowhunters. But hey --- There's a wedding coming up so of course it's much more important to focus on finding the right dress than on finding the killer. Gotta have priorities, right?

There was some witty banter That was fun, but most of the dialogue felt wooden and contrived (and in some scenes even cringe-worthy ...). At times it felt like I was watching on episode of a badly-written soap opera.

Then there are the make-out scenes between Jace and Clary Which Actually had me laughing out loud in disbelief: because theywere so badly written. Remember how in the first books Their scenes were sometimes steamy without them doing anything besides Actually kissing (or even less than that)? You could almost feel the sexual tension between them leaping off the page. This time around the scenes are more graphic But They read likesome really bad schoolgirl fantasy.

Getting back to the characters ... I'll come right out and admit it --- I * loved * Jace in the first books. Yes, he Could be arrogant and oft eyeroll-inducing, but despite it all I really liked him. This time around, though, he grated on my nerves. In fact, he made me want to smack him over the head most of the time --- preferably with something heavy.

For Example, Jace suffers from horrible nightmares in Which he always ends up hurting / killing Clary. Now, what do you do When You have continued nightmares about the same thing? Talk to someone? Get help? Therapy, maybe? Or You Could Just behave completely Call jerk-ish (and I realize that's not really a word), not give any Explanations, not talk to anyone and make yourself and everyone around you miserable. Jace went for the Latter Of Those options. Why I have no idea.

Clary and Simon alsohave Their moments of utter stupidity, and Alec's jealousy of all of Magnus's exes what ridiculous. I mean - the guy's immortal and has been around for a really long time ... Alec must have know before he started dating Magnus did the guy would probably have a string of exes.

What I would have liked to have seen:

- Jace and Clary as a happy couple. At least for a little while! I mean, after all the shit They went through in the first trilogy They deserved a break. But no, almost right from the beginning of the book gives Jace Clary the cold shoulder. Occasionally he thaws off enough to make out with her, and then it's back to Avoiding ago.

- Spunky Isabelle. But somehow it felt like she only what Actually in this book to Provide some comic relief occasionally.

- Magnus and Alec as a happy couple. But - kinda like Jace and Clary - from the moment They arrive on the scene They are Continuously fighting.

- A strong and interesting plot. Something to grave me and make me count the days until the next one comes out. Sadly, the book ended up being the exact opposite.

To sum it up, "City of Fallen Angels" had good parts and bad parts. I did not have to force myself to finish it or anything, but I do not feel compelled (or even tempted ...) to read the next book, either.

Finally a decent "foil" Rank: 5/5
July 28
Level 36 unsolvable ... Rank: 2/5
January 7
Weak .... 5 Rank: 2/5
March 15
Very nice home theater system Rank: 4/5
December 27
Keep morale ... Rank: 5/5
September 3
A must 30 Rank: 5/5
December 26

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