A good script, a bad romance

However, as said in previous reviews, the antagonist is not very convincing, I do not think the level 26 is justified. As much volume 1 could be considered as a thriller, as volume 2 pays more in policing.
And even pitfall in the first volume: this is not a novel, it is a script. All is an action and it reads quickly, but there is really no room for imagination, storytelling relies too much on the videos. It's not really "evil" written, it is "poor": this lack of impact, more precise adjective, adverbs, etc ... I do not expect descriptive passages 40 pages or an accuracy of one nanometer, far from it, but more concrete evidence to make my own visual and emotional picture of the events. It has two (2) descriptive passages that have a decent size, unfortunately, they have a taste for me incongruous they contrast with the rest and seem awkward, wobbly, I wondered where they came seriously .

Conclusion: There will be no volume 3 for me.