The narrative is flat, the development of visionary intrigue, interesting basic idea but construction ended at the edge of cliché. The lack of pace of writing is more of a script of the novel, and when I realized this last point, I immediately understood what bothered me in this book: the author us "says "things more than he shows them to us, in other words it seems to read words, that's all, imagination is not onboard. Often it seems that the words were chosen just because they "did well" in the sentence, nothing else, even finding some passages, which ultimately add nothing to the plot. Ultimately, it is a banal, visionary novel that could have been much shorter, but would have remained equally banal and strange thing, however, he lets himself read to the end, and eventually leave us ... a feeling of unfinished ...
