I think that's a good erotic story flat with 1 / descriptions "applied" sexual acts; 2 / improbable dialogues: "I will, thank you You know, it's nice to have offered me to sleep with you I galérée It would have to go alone in my city at this hour.." .. . (!); 3 / downright corny clichés: "she was making love with Luc Imbély, the most coveted professor of the Sorbonne." (!); too much slag in writing dialogues with, "he said", "she retorted scornfully," "if he astonished", "he growled," "whispered Does it by ear "in spades. Well, you'll understand that I was not packed ... (ServaneL.)
