Good plot, but ... 1

Good book, good and powerful story that makes you want to know more but I'm a little disappointed with the author's writing style. Despite the suspense and the various actions of this book, I really struggled to read it because of that. There is much confusion in the sentiments of Thomas and in the descriptions. I think it looks almost too childish.
Moreover, the fact that it is written in the imperfect / simple past-that the narrator is not Thomas, make me much less alive than I lespérais.
But overall I still enjoyed reading and I'll end the saga but I found much worse than Divergente or Hunger Games which I think are much better writing.