About the story in general: actually a pretty good approach if one is thrown also directly into the action, sometimes exciting, the end is here but tried very to press the lacrimal gland.
As has often criticized the emergence of all more or less involved in the end, incl. Cotta. I personally found this very amusing, especially from off getting the typical 'Oh!' the Three ??? is heard. Sure, absolutely acts covered but I think just giving the whole thing the necessary humor.
All in all, the result worth listening to, simply because the speaker. The story is standard, but not rotten.