Pretty disappointed 3

A lot of little things have bothered me during my reading. For VF, it must be emphasized that translation is sometimes terrible, and contains a lot of shells, which made me a bit upset. Then there are inconsistencies between the characters of the characters and what they do. I struggled to join the exhibitionist aspect of Sara shy, and I did not really understand the logic of Max, who loves the pictures of their antics remain private, while bringing in a club libertine. It's not a bit contradictory?

But what I missed most was the absence of the first volume humor. Certainly, I love the hate / love relationship, and for that Chloe and Bennett were very talented, but here the fact that the story revolves around two strangers who appronfondissent together their fantasy becomes something almost mundane, some already seen . In the end, nothing distinguishes this book an erotic romance as found everywhere nowadays. And that's probably the biggest complaint I have to do: wanting to ride the wave of borderline relationships that hot things out of the ordinary, in the end we are left with an ordinary erotic book. Too bad, because at the beginning it is very hot. But then it became a little too crooked for me personally.

It's frustrating because Sara and Max have potential. Especially Max, who is the archetype of the man with the impressive professional success, and could melt any reader. But a little more depth at the feelings of the characters would not hurt, especially for Sara and her past. In the end, very little is known about our heroes, and that's unfortunate.

In short, I have not found this flame that Volume 1 had brought me, so I am a little disappointed. I still advise you to read it for you make your own mind because it is very nice.