It is therefore ideal for those who love pies heroines: his inner monologue: Oh but, what's happening? / Oh, but these people do? / But oh, is it real? etc ... makes you want to bang your head against the walls. A little touch of humor anyway, the last quarter of the book, Dominic (the dominator master who spends his time whining that he regrets having hurt him) offered him a full leather suit SM + a box. When she opened the box his monologue says "Oh my god, what is it? Mini-clips for the hair?" I laughed, but I do not think the author did it on purpose.
Good luck ...